11 thoughts on “Who is This? by Rival’s Rapture

  1. dermonarch says:

    This story has touched me emotionally. Especially the way it ended and how your characters behaved was very moving.

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  2. K says:

    Fantastic writing. Sad ending. Too real by far.

    It’s your best work. Not necessarily my favorite, but your best. Hands down.

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    1. Rival's Rapture says:

      Thank you so much! :3

      And there are some more images, of the previous models, in the Director’s Cut gallery on DeviantArt and on my are page on the site here.

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  3. phoenixfalcone says:

    This is hands down one of the best stories I’ve ever read. Peak Rivals. Amazing writing throughout, and evidence that you can have a compelling plot to go with what we’re all here for…

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    1. Rival's Rapture says:

      Phoenix:

      Thank you so much for you comment! I am glad you liked the story and that you consider it so highly. I’d be very interested in where you would weigh in on the sequel or no sequel debate. Would you like to see Claire and Lauren tangle again? Or is the story better left as is?

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      1. phoenixfalcone says:

        Hi Rival’s, I did not realise I missed this comment, apologies. I would probably lean towards the no sequel side as this is classic on it’s own. It seems more realistic that Lauren did not pursue a rematch.

        Having said that, I would certainly not complain if a sequel came into being. There is certainly room for it. There are certainly a few avenues you could take that would make a sequel work. But I would say unless you wanted to, I’d be happy with this one standing on it’s own.

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  4. Gomez says:

    incredibly hot. you write well, and the art truly helps. I’m hooked.

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